http://yoru-no-hikaru.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yoru-no-hikaru.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sky_no_yuki 2016-01-25 03:29 pm (UTC)

Now, this one was definitely different. I don't often encounter good Ohmiya smut - saying that it's to my liking. This, for one, is just the right amount between awkward and hot, which is already charming in itself.

LOL at Ohno. Being horny he doesn't care much about Nino's back. XD But well, if Nino's up for it, things can't be that bad, right? ^_~

They sure make the best of the not so perfect situation. It's cool how "calm" Ohno is, meaning that he guides them through the entire thing without rushing, because someone might come in. He finds a way to make it enjoyable for both of them and even have his fun with Nino in that closet. I like teasing Oh-chan. ^^

The way they work together show that they know each other inside out, acting as a team and making sure that they will both get waht they want and need. It hapens a lot that when things are hurried one party is being quite neglected, but there's an almsot astounding balance here.

The smut altogether was intriguing, the pace and flow are pleasant, it's easy to follow them as they go.

Thank you for this. :D

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